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Review Margot gets an unexpected visit

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Bookangel, 8 Jun 2016.

  1. Bookangel

    Bookangel Administrator Staff Member

    Margot gets an unexpected visit

    There is nothing wrong with the story itself, which is great for kids, but the presentation needs a little work to improve readability.
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  2. rz3300

    rz3300 Member

    Well again I will choose to take it as more of a challenge. I have to say that the title really lends itself to mystery, which is always good in my opinion. I am always open to stories that are good for children, too, just given the nature of my work. Presentation is one thing that I can work with, though, so I might have a good time with this one. Thanks for sharing.
     

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