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ReviewAside Watch the hands!

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by ReviewAside, July 25, 2021.

  1. ReviewAside

    ReviewAside New Member Staff Member

    [​IMG]In one hand he held the gun,
    his other held the door closed
    and with his other he pulled her close

    Are three hands usual in this world?

    Review Aside: Watch where characters put their hands!

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  2. sliara

    sliara Active Member

    Ok, I bet he held her with his "free hand", doesn't matter if it's left or right.
     

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