What sort of thing bugs you when you're reading? Fonts, character traits/types, plot devices, tenses, POVs, descriptions, etc. Some things that really bug me: Repetitive physical descriptions - but mainly when they are unrealistic. I don't need to hear about how her violet eyes sparkled against her raven black hair that almost looks blue in the sunlight. I forget what book it was, but every time they mentioned her hair, they ALWAYS mentioned that it could look blue in certain lighting, even if that lighting wasn't applicable in the scene. It drove me nuts. Love triangles can bug me a lot, too. However, these can be done well sometimes. I just don't really like it when it's the primary focus. It also almost always seems to be female-male-male love triangles. Why not try switching it up and have the female protagonist be one of the choices instead of the one deciding? I have more, but I'll leave it here for now.