I tried to review this, but ran into a major problem that made me put the book down by page five.

The cover is fantastic, the writing, from what I could tell , OK. The formatting was abominable. I don’t mind paragraphs being separated by a blank line, as long as the line is present. Sometimes it wasn’t and sometimes the issue was confused by random line breaks in the middle of sentences. There were typos and run-on words, including wasn’tt and yes, the two t’s were in the book. This looks as though someone took a print published paperback and OCR’d it through a scanner.

Fix the formatting and I will review it. Currently it is back on the queue as an unfinished.