After a one night stand, the person that leaves the apartment has to take the walk of shame. Shame? Most have no idea how fortunate they are to still be alive. Good morning with a killer ventures into the strange depths of a would-be familiar world. Get into the mind of a murderer, dance with his intentions in this short story as John watches Mel on her last morning. What could happen if you left the bar with the wrong guy?
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"He's a waste of oxygen, she's stupid, they're a perfect match."
Reviewer: Reader for Bookangel.
The problem I had with this one was the description: "What could happen if you left the bar with the wrong guy?". Most women are accutely aware of the risks, so unless there was a twist (and I can think of an obvious one immediately, from a book entitled Man Eater) this was due for a two. I'm not sure if this is meant to be a look into a serial killer's head or man's erotica. I say for guys, because few women get turned on by the idea of sex with a guy whose spent the last half hour planning how to kill you.
The characters are limited. Mel is either from a guy's point of view fantastic, from a woman's point of view stupid. She leaves the bar with a guy she's met once who practically quotes from the serial killer's playbook (I think your fantastic, what a nice guy I am, lets go somewhere private.) Gary/John, the serial killer, is utterly egocentric. After setting up a world to ensure he only encounters the type of woman who will be his prey, he then assumes all women are like that. He's a woman hater, which is obvious when he considers murdering divorcees a mercy-killing.
I suspect this was meant to be a hot, erotic, story. Unfortunately by the time it gets to the sex, the only thing this reader wanted to see was the lead's corpse. He's a waste of oxygen, she's stupid, they're a perfect match.
I got bored.
Rating: 2
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tirial (5 April 2017)
Reader, were you not having a good day when you reviewed this? I've seen you write one stars and zero stars that were more restrained...
Miranda (10 April 2017)
I wonder if this author really took enough time when creating those characters because it doesn't seem very well thought out from a psychological or human behavior point of view.
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