it feels derivative of it's inspirations and needs something to help it stand on its own merits
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A zombie novella that expands on the world it is set in, while still telling it's own story.
This short horror comedy is great, but at a ten minute read there just isn't enough of it.
While it has an interesting premise, it isn't really part of this short story that tries to do too much.
The author knows their material, but sadly is not good at communicating it to their desired audience.
Light on the helicopters and billionaire lifestyle, strong on the Dallas or Dynasty overtones, and has the required happily ever after ending.
It is good to see rhyme and cadence in effective use, though it also contains some truly odd use of language.
some of the ideas are unique, and the story itself could be engaging, but set against this I was fighting the editing and writing each step of the way, and it really needs a proofreader.
I do not like slating memoirs, but poor formatting and major structure issues with the content mean this is not a pleasure to read and of little historical value.
a lovely little story about Indigo adapting to losing her hair with the love and support of her family, pitched at a perfect level for children.
ten minutes of absolute joy for anyone who has ever spent time they shouldn't with their head buried in a book
An enjoyable short, that plays with sci-fi tropes and leads cleverly into the main novel